2015年高考作文优秀范文：登山活动

文中从句数量过少；作者词汇基础不错，还请增加高级词汇的使用；文中衔接词丰富。

Ladies and Getenlmen, we will share a story of Climbing Mountain which was organized by Xing Guang High School. The classmates climbed the Daqing Mountain on 10th April. There were many memories in this journey. It was so active for all of the students at the beginning of Climbing Mountain. Tired as everyone was, they gave support to each other in the end. Thus, individuals in increasing number climbed the Mountain in the end. It is so necessary that schools should hold quite a few activities to keep students' fit. I deem that students can also gain some knowledge during activities.