2015年高考作文优秀范文：登山活动

文中从句数量过少；文中高级词汇使用较少，但单词拼写做的很棒；文中衔接词丰富。

Ladies and Getenlmen, we will share a story of Climbing Mountain which was organized by Xing Guang High School. The classmates climbed the Daqing Mountain on 10th April. There were many memories in this journey. It was so active for all of the students at the beginning of Climbing Mountain. Tired as everyone was, they gave support to each other in the end. Thus, individuals in increasing number climbed the Mountain in the end. It is so necessary that schools should hold quite a few activities to keep students' fit. I deem that students can also gain some knowledge in the course of activities.