题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练;作者能较熟练地使用高级词汇,但词汇丰富度总体不足;不能熟练使用过渡词,文章结构不严谨。
Computer and Man With the development of society and technology, computer gaining more popularity in our life. Honestly, computer do humen a great favor. Nowadays, computer is closed to our life. On the one hand, teachers use computer to educate theirstudents in class, which is convence. On the other hand, people can use computer learn more knowledge anytime and anywhere. And they can learn some knowledge out of class, which can broaden their horizon. In a word, computers are closely related to human life.