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2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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要求：: Suppose a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown，what is the most interestingplace you would like to take him/her to see and why?

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恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词，衔接手法做的很棒；复杂句使用不错，句法规范；文中高级词汇不足。

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If a foreign friend of mine is going to come to my hometown,I will take her or him to the White Tower.The White Tower has a long history which can date back in to Tang Dystiny. There are many romantic stories of it.The most famous story is about love.They said that it is a sad story that is among two lovers who fell in love with each other but could't live in the end.And it is also a place where people would prey for what they want.It's really a absorbing place to see!

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