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请作者增加高级词汇的使用，不过单词拼写做的很好；句法方面做得很棒，但是从句不多；采用了适当的衔接手法，层次清晰。
If one of my foreign friends is going to come to my hometown, I will take her or him to the White Tower. There is a long history of it which can date back in to Tang Dystiny. There are many romantic stories of it. The most famous story is about love. They said that it is a frustrated story that is among two lovers who fell in love with each other but couldn't live in the end. And it is also a place where people would prey for what they want. It's really an absorbing place to see!
