2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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My hometown is famous for the river,and many pepole due it to come here.In our chairhood,we used to swim in the river which is very clean of water.What's more,my hometown’s building is also histry culture which is attracted a lot of pepole to visit.Althourh the litter town is deloping in ecomony,the local pepole is very happy of life.The delicion food is more important for us,where has all kind of food giving you to choose.I believe that you wiil love here's food even love my hometown. I am very happy you wiil come here.I wiil take you visit the beautiful town by car to mike you enjour the view.