2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

复杂句使用不错，句法规范；全文结构较为严谨；作者词汇基础挺好，能灵活使用部分高级词汇，但词汇拼写要再接再厉。

My hometown is famous for the river, and many people due it to come here. In our childhood,we used to swim in the river which is more than clean of water.What's more, my hometown’s building is also histry culture which is attracted a lot of pepole to visit.Although the litter town is developing in economic, the local pepole is very happy of life.The delicious food is more important for us,where has all kinds of food giving you to choose.I believe that you wiil love food of my town even love my hometown. I am very happy you wiil come here.I wiil take you visit the beautiful town by car to mike you enjoy the view.