2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，但高级词汇稍显不足；文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用；文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨。

Welcome to my hometown warmly,my friend. There are lots of interesting places and fascinating sights in my hometown. You can let yourself go to have a good time there. When you come to my city ,I will be bound to visit you one place where has a variety of special food and culture.If you want to experience delicious refection,come here.If you love studying as well as fun sharing ,come here.If you like to explore different history and culture,just come here. I firmly believe that you will enjoy yourself. I expect you come to my city where makes you happy.