文中词汇表达较丰富恰当,但高级词汇稍显不足;文章在句法方面做的很棒,从句和复杂句的使用不错;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨。
Welcome to my hometown warmly,my friend. There are lots of interesting places and fascinating sights in my hometown. You can let yourself go to have a ball there. When you come to my city ,I will be bound to tell you one place where has a variety of special food and culture.Provided that you want to experience delicious food,come here.Provided that you love studying as well as fun sharing ,come here.Provided that you like to explore different history and culture,just come here. I firmly believe that you will enjoy yourself. I expect you come to my city where makes you happy.