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2012年6月英语六级作文真题:人际沟通

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:50浏览次数:4565
要求:
题目 The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication
要求
1.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition.
2.the topic is "The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication"
3.You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
字数:150满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分59.5分
评语:

文中词汇使用较丰富,高级词汇使用要加强;错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

用户练习作文:

Everyone in the world has its duty and business , but nobody can finish it without the other helps. So we need communication . It is very very importance . For example , when you miss a thing ,something like a dog? If you find it by yourself , you just like a fly without idea, maybe you will fine nothing in a day . In other side , you ask the people , they always can give you the right side , than you can fine the dog with their helps. It is more work than the front manner. It can say the importance of communication . A person has the skill of communication always more easier than the one has not.

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