文中词汇使用较丰富,高级词汇使用要加强;错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。
Everyone in the world has its duty and business , but nobody can finish it without the other helps. So we need communication . It is very very importance . For example , when you miss a thing ,something like a dog? If you find it by yourself , you just like a fly without idea, maybe you will fine nothing in a day . In other side , you ask the people , they always can give you the right side , than you can fine the dog with their helps. It is more work than the front manner. It can say the importance of communication . A person has the skill of communication always more easier than the one has not.
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