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My favorite sport is playing football. The reason why I love playing football one by chance opportunate when I went home of the road I picked up a football and playing football with my friends.Finally I love deeply playing football. I often train and compete with my classmates.My favorite football star is David Beckham ,and my the great wish is be a professional football player.