一年级英语作文:A Busy Day

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Hello!I am a student. I was happily last weekend. On Saturday morning,I went to the park.The park was beautiful in the morning. Because the air was very fresh and I saw lots of flowers in the park.In the afternoon,I went fishing in the park.I played happily.On Sunday ,I visited grandparents and saw a film in the morning. In the afternoon,I ate some delicious food. I was busy,but I was very happy.