福建仙游县承璜第二学校2012-2013学年八年级上学期期末试卷作文试题

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Computers are very popular with people.And the Internet is one importent part of the computer.People use Internet to play games,learn English so on.Also,the computer has some advantage and some disadvantage.For example,some children play the bad games all day,so they forget to study,thier grades are very bad.Of course,some students study by the Internet,so they get very good grades.All a word,we should use Interner to learn great things.