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2001年1月英语六级作文真题:面试成功的因素

发布时间:2013-05-14 19:08浏览次数:2299
要求:

Directions:  For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic How to Succeed in a Job Interview? You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below: 

1. 面试在求职过程中的作用  

2. 取得面试成功的因素:仪表、举止谈吐、能力、专业知识、自信、实事求是……   

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评语:

采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;文中一些从句的使用为文章增色;作者词汇表达较丰富多样,高级词汇使用较熟练。

用户练习作文:

The interview which you find work playing a important role is having lot of focus from employee. Consequently , we should pay more atention in interview . From interview,HR will understand what you are thing about ,what you are waiting to do ,and more important is weather you have aspire . If you want be success in interview , You must be care with such aspect: First,you should be good in talk , appearance and cloth . you should tell the officer about what you are learn about ,what you are perfect . Also , you should be confidence because it is important for yourself .The most important thing is that your ability should be great so that you can win the compete .

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