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Sitting before the television when it reported the news about someone saved others and became a hero. The first thing come to my mind is that what's the motivation behind most heroic behaviours? Is that sense of justice, readiness to help or just want to be remembered or heroes? When smothing happened around us, could we actually know we are sober. From my own perspective, at that moment, people's mind is sober and the body also response their mind to save victim in the first time as asoon as they can perhap to call 120 because they do not have the ability to save. Of course, things always out of control. Some people will die during the process of saving victim. Part from us might think they were not sober because they left their family for saving a stranger. However, i think they"re exactlly know what they were doing at that moment. Even they may not exit any longer, their spirits still reminded in people's heart and are sober permanently.