采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;作者词汇基础很好,也能较灵活使用高级词汇,望继续努力;作者在句法层面做的很棒。
Sitting before the television when it reported the news about someone saved others and became a hero. The first thing comes to my mind is that what's the motivation behind most heroic behaviours? Is that sense of justice, readiness to help or just wants to be remembered or heroes? When something happened around us, could we actually know we are sober. From my own perspective, at that moment, people's mind is sober and the body also response their minds to save victim in the first time as soon as they can or perhaps to call 120 because they do not have the ability to save. Of course, things always out of control. Some people will die during the process of saving victim. Part from us might think they were not sober because they left their family for saving a stranger. However, i think they"re exactlly know what they were doing at that moment. Even they may not exit any longer, their spirits still reminded in people's heart and are sober permanently.