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2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:38浏览次数:71616
要求:
Suppose a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown,what is the most interestingplace you would like to take him/her to see and why?
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采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;作者在句法层面做的很棒;作者词汇基础不错,在高级词汇的积累上还要再接再厉。

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Sitting before the television when it reported the news about someone saved others and became a hero. The first thing comes to my mind is that what's the motivation behind most heroic behaviours? Is that sense of justice, readiness to help or just wants to be remembered or heroes? When something happened around us, could we actually know we are sober. From my own perspective, at that moment, people's mind is sober and the body also response their minds to save victim in the first time as soon as they can or perhaps to call 120 for they do not have the ability to save. Of course, things are always out of control. Some people will die in the course of the process of saving victim. Part from us might think they were not sober because they left their families for saving a stranger. Nevertheless, I think they're exactly know what they were doing at that moment. Even they may not exit any longer, their spirits still reminded in people's heart and are sober permanently.

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