作者词汇量积累很好,高级词汇积累要重视;若加强一些复杂句和从句的使用,文章会更棒;文中基本没有过渡词和衔接词,建议增加衔接词汇的积累。
Dear Mr. Johnson, We have received the 3,000 products from your company on December 22nd, 2008, but according to our signing of the No. 35 order, the number of products should be 3,500, the other 500 products we have not received so far. Please check your product list. We are looking forward to your early reply! Yours faithfully, Wang Hai yang