小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

结构良好，但是语言不流畅；文中词汇使用较丰富，但高级词汇使用太少；增加一些从句的使用，文章会更不错。

Jack is my good friend.He has big eyes,and i want to have big eyes too.He has square face and dark brown hair . He is the tallest boy in all of my friends .He always wears a smile on her face and looks happy .He is helpful and is ready to help people any time ,He is also generous . He is welling to share things with his friends . he is music. he plays the piano well. He wants to be a pianist and travel around the world for the poor chilldren when he grows up. I like him very much.