小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

结构良好，但是语言不流畅；文中词汇使用较丰富，但高级词汇使用太少；增加一些从句的使用，文章会更不错。

Jack is my good acquaintance. He has big eyes,and I want to have big eyes too. He has square face and dark brown hair. He is the tallest boy in all of my friends .He always wears a smile on her face and looks happy .He is helpful and is ready to help people any time ,He is also generous. He is welling to share things with his friends . he is music. he plays the piano well. He wants to be a pianist and travel around the world for the impoverished chilldren when he grows up. I like him overwhelmingly much.