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复杂句使用不错，句法规范；文中能较灵活地使用高级词汇，但词汇量积累还要努力；连接词过少，建议增加衔接词汇的积累。
With the growth of age, would you want to spend times of my life in something that was great for us or our society. A meanningful life require that the greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it. On the childrenhood,we should study hard and master the knowledge from the book and the environment that we lived. In order to make an achievement in the future, construct the basies. When growth to the adult age, we should spend the time on working and planed how to change the state of life that will make it great better. We shouldn't waste the time in meaningless things.
