2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):The most interesting place

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First of all, we are going to talk about the story of the hero of the film in the process of depression.The husband used to be a meticulous pursuit of perfect office worker, in the long-term high load under the pressure of work,but gradually become a bit unusual.He always be insomnia, difficult to fall asleep at night,even though he still goes to work everyday.Hair up and will forget the phone before going out, which in the past will not happen to him.Sometimes there is no reason to be depressed, and even a trash can cause a lot of association.He gradually becomes loss of appetite, always feel do not want to eat .One day, he begins to cook as usual, but find that he can't do that for no reason.He even produces the idea of suicide.His wife thinks that he is too tired to work, which causes these conditions,so let him go to see a doctor and he is diagnosed with typical depression.At this time, his wife begins to recall this period of time since her husband's unusual, she finds that herself ignores a lot of things what happens to her husband.When the husbands tells her that his loss of appetite, the wife does not give too much care, and even blames her husband to live up to her mind.When the husband complains that his back pain, his wife feels that this is no big problem, like a cold, muscle acid can cause back pain,may only be his psychological role.Because her husband sleepy snoring awakened her, so she wakes up him and let him go to sleep next door.Husband as a company's after-sales staff, every day to deal with a variety of customer calls, must be on the phone to maintain a good attitude, but nevertheless, he still received complaints from customers.The husband is a very serious and meticulous person . He will be with different cheese and tie every day. If someone else writes his own name wrong, he will be very concerned, and as much as possible to correct it.He works as a company's after-sales staff, every day crowds to go to work and deal with a variety of customer calls, must be on the phone to maintain a good attitude, but nevertheless, he still receives complaints from customers.In fact,the husband has long been under great pressure of life, but has not a very good way to vent,so he has suppressed himself for a long time.This neglect is very common in our daily life and is not easy to detect, because when we stay with very close people, we won't consider a lot, but often talk and act in the way to make ourselves comfortable.The beginning of depression is always very secretive, and even people feel fatigue caused by too much pressure , sometimes more like a cold symptoms,so we also called depression as a cold heart. However, once the cold is out of control, we will fall into the abyss.