2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

句法知识掌握不错，但文中从句数量偏少；建议增加衔接词和过渡词的使用；词汇表达较灵活准确，高级词汇使用过少，另外注意文中个别的拼写错误。

My hometown is beatiful city in China and near to the Yangtze River,welcome you here,my dear friend.Please come with me,we must cross the Yangtze River by ship to reach my village.It's an interesting experence as the river is not very big but there is not a bridge across it.and i will show you around to visit the interesting places.