2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，但高级词汇稍显不足；错误句子很少，但从句使用不熟练；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳。

My hometown My hometown in China ,which is beautiful and interesting . My home town in Guangdong province .My mother , my father,my brother and me are living it.You should see the animal zoo that have many animals of we can't see. I really hope you go to those place if you like animals.From my point of view ,it would be better if you go to the water park. Because it is a famous place in my hometown .I will conclude by saying you can come my hometown