高一英语作文模拟题:文明的举止

有效地采用了多种衔接方法，层次清晰；作者高级词汇量积累不足，部分单词有拼写错误；作者应增加从句的使用。

Polite behave reflects not only personal imagine but also national civilizational level,So Improving people behave is the most important aim for every contry. China is a developing contry, we have made a great progress in economy development.but we have a less success in spirit than material. a lot of people used to spit and speak aloud in the public area, some others like to smoking in some place where smoking is phobited.all those behaves damaged our imagines. we should learn from other contries,such as Japan and U.S, Everyone pay more attention for their own behave.First we should obey all kinds of rules and laws,and then we should repect others.