2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

语句间的衔接成分用得不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；作者英语功底扎实，可适当调整文中从句数量；作者词汇基础不错，注意极个别的拼写错误。

A beautiful city in China which name is JieYang. There are more interesting places, and that is my hometown.Next,I will introduct some interesting places to you. First,the first station is MianHu town,it has a long time history,there are long of delicious snack，for example ChunJuan,youtaio,huasheng,and so. Secondly,the next station is JieYang building,that is a symbol of JieYang,this is a ancient building,there are many people visit it every year, the screen is so beautiful especially on the top. Finally,the last station is xiangzi bridge, this have a story about HanYu who is a Tang dynasty poetry, the bridge is building by his subordinate and he, long time ago,the river has lived shark,but the people should through the river to buy the daily use,so many people died in river,HanYu see the situation decision to build the bridge.