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2013年12月英语六级作文真题附范文(第2套):信息爆炸

发布时间:2014-06-09 16:09浏览次数:5740
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Directions: For this party you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay about the impact of the information explosion by referring to the saying "A wealth of information creates a poverty of attention. You can give examples to illustrate your point and then explain what you can do to avoid being distracted by irrelevant information. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
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从句数量偏少;文章丰富的词汇表达请发扬,同时能较准确地使用高级词汇;全文结构较为严谨。

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With the development of the society, we lived a world that the way acquire the information were diverse, which result the information explosion. We can find that when we look for the use information in our work or life, a large number of irrevalent information will be displayed in our search interface. It waste our time to pick the ones that we could used, and attracted our attention in other information that is useless for us. About this phenomenon, we should well defined goals before search for the information, avoid waste the time and energy to pick. Sum up, we lived a worid that a wealth information has been offered, which result the information explosion. We should keep a clear mind and make the right decesive.

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