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2013年考研英语作文预测话题:沟通的意义

发布时间:2013-08-23 17:28浏览次数:12974
要求:

题目要求:

围绕沟通的意义写一篇小文章。简明阐述自己的观点。

字数要求:

200字以内

用户的作文(系统评分92.5分
评语:

作者词汇基础扎实,拼写也很棒;作者在句法层面做的很棒;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨。

用户练习作文:

In accordance with what is detailedly depicted in the pie chart above,we can observe distinctly that the percentage of consumption of diverse life aspects is different.The main expenditure of an average Beijing family is spent on food,which occupies 25% of its total expenditure.The next two significant expending items are transport and housing,which are 15% and 12% respectively.According to these figures which is given in above-mentioned,folks can easily see that the cost of living in Beijing is very high. It is no difficult for us to put forward some factors responsible for this phenomenon.In the first place,food and housing are the two main necessities for human's survival,which has been intensively grasped by merchants who always seek profits.In the light of a recent Internet survey,approximately 65% real estate corporations have bought the flats of their own in order to push up the housing price.In the second place,the economic growth which leads to extensive inflation has contributed a lot to the constant rise of overall products.In the third place,the average income of common citizens remains at a relative low level compared to the soaring inflation rate. Taking into account seriously what has been discussed so far,it is an evident fact that the current situation is no good for the provincial civilians who struggle to survive in Beijing.Needless to say,we should take some drastic measures to alleviate the worsening trend,if we want to attract more talent from other places.

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