2.然后以约120个词就 “过度依赖电脑的弊端”的主题发表看法,
并包括如下要点:
沉迷于电脑对学生造成的不利影响;错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练;文中高级词汇的使用比较灵活,但有个别拼写错误;过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错。
Well,it is absolutely that computers can benefite us a lot . However,many things can be harmful if we abuse it. Computer can help us study and communicate,but if we get addicated to it,we willnot concerntrate on our subjects and did well like before.Besides ,hackers can threaten the country if we donnot face it properly .What is more,surfing the Internet may cost a lot of money.Which may bring problems to our budget .As a whole,we must take the Internet seriously.Whether it is harmful or beneficial,we must find our own way to use it .