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恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词，衔接手法做的很棒；复杂句使用不错，句法规范；文章词汇表达较丰富，不过请仔细检查词汇的拼写。
A Beautifui City in China There are many cities in China,and they all have their own beauty.If my foreign friend will come to China to have a travel,Chengdu is the most interesting place I would like to take him to see,and the reasons as the follows. First of all,Chengdu is my hometown,I would like to introduce it to my forndeign friend.Second,as we all know,Chengdu is the place where pandas live,so just come to Chengdu and see pandas.Of course ,Chengdu has many interesting things not only pandas.Do you konw Dujiangyan,Wuhouci and so on?Do you want to see them in your persent?If you want ,I blieve my foreign friend must want to be a friend of Chengdu.Last but not least,with the development of enconomy,Chengdu becomes more and more famous in internation. Chengdu is so wanderful,why not have a travel in Chengdu?
