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能够很好的使用长难句且句法很棒；作者词汇表达丰富度较高，就是高级词汇用的太少；恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词，衔接手法做的很棒。
A Beautifui City in China There are many cities in China, and they all have their own beauty. If my foreign friend will come to China to have travel, Chengdu is the most interesting place I would like to take him to see, and the reasons as the follows. First of all, Chengdu is my hometown, I would like to introduce it to my foreign friend. Second, as we all know, Chengdu is the place where pandas live, so just come to Chengdu and see pandas. Of course, Chengdu has many other interesting things. Do you know Dujiangyan, Wuhou Temple and so on? Do you want to see them in your persent? If you want, I think my foreign friend must want to be a friend of Chengdu. Last but not least, with the development of economy, Chengdu becomes more and more famous in a the world. Chengdu is so wanderful, why not have travel in Chengdu?
