2010年12月英语六级作文真题:高校评级

词汇表达不够丰富，要增加学术词汇的使用；若增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；结构不严谨，几乎没有使用衔接词，上下文衔接欠流畅。

nowadays, with the knowledge was attached great importance, many universities have huge competition between each other.for appealing more students and to build up a famous university , more and more university to banking.in this way , they can show that university is wonderful. for this , people have different views. some people think that it is a standard for a university to show its power.it is good for university to have a great improve .and then , another people think that it is not very important.because a university is not only rely on banking .a great university should put the energy to improve their teaching power and consider how to make students to be better. as for me, it is a good aspect for a university to banking.because it is a appearance for people.it is good for university to be better. but as a great university, should not only to banking , and they also to improve the teaching , and to cultivate students to be outstanding.