作者词汇量积累不错,能够较恰当地使用高级词汇;作者在句法层面做的很棒;行文较为流畅,作者文中过渡词使用的不错。
Sowing the seeds, nurturing growth and harvesting the rewards' process There is a point of view that a student's success in university study is like the process of farming, and which is described by sowing the seed, nurturing growth and harvesting the rewards' process. Indubitably, this is the most appropriate analogy. Therefore I fairly subscribe to this appointment, and now I will use my own experience to demonstrate this view. By sowing the seeds, since I came to the college, l known that my major requires paying for much time. Time is to I what the sun is to Houyi. And l got out early and came back at dusk. By nurturing growth, the crop needs water is like I need knowledge, between study time, l learned from my educators and from many major books. My pleasure in harvesting not only in high scores of exams of the course, but also I won a Nation Scholarship for Encouragement. Everything comes to one who waits. No matter what we learn, we should make up our minds and full preparation.