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中秋节 the Mid-Autumn Festival 农历 lunar calendar
赏月 enjoy the full moon 月饼 moon cake文中应增加从句和复合句的使用；请作者增加词汇丰富度，增加高级词汇的使用，改正文中拼写错误；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。
In the eight 15th of lunar calendar,the day is one of the tranditional Chinese festivals,which called Mid Autumn festival. The moon becomes big,circular,and bright. As people looking forward the Moon,eating moon cakes,they usually miss their hometown folks. They communicate to bless each other. In the eight 15th of lunar calendar,the day is one of the tranditional Chinese festvials,which called Mid Autumn festival. The moon becomes big,circular,and bright. As people looking forward the Moon,eating moon cakes,they usually miss their hometown folks. They communicate to bless each other.
