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中秋节 the Mid-Autumn Festival 农历 lunar calendar
赏月 enjoy the full moon 月饼 moon cake文中应增加从句和复合句的使用；文章用词太过单一，请作者增加词汇丰富度；不能熟练使用过渡词，文章结构欠佳。
In the Augest 15th of the lunar calendar,the day which is called Mid Autumn festival is one of the traditional Chinese festivals,. The moon becomes big,circular,and bright. As people looking forward the Moon,eating moon cakes,they usually miss their hometown folks. They communicate to bless each other. In the Augest 15th of the lunar calendar,the day is one of the traditional Chinese festivals,which is called Mid Autumn festival. The moon becomes big,circular,and bright. As people looking forward the Moon,eating moon cakes,they usually miss their hometown folks. They communicate to bless each other.
