Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
文中从句数量不足;拼写方面做得很棒,平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;层次分明,但过渡词欠缺。
The above picture description a daily scenario that communication between teenagers and their parents through the Internet.There is no denying the fact that electronic communication change our life greatly,but I don't thing it will replace face-to-face contact. Firstly,face-to-face communication is much better than electronic communication for keep the relationship between parents and the teenagers.Secondly,face-to-face communication can make people pay more attention to what they are talking about.