题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
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作者词汇表达较为熟练,学术词汇使用不是很多;若增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。
Trust is one of the good present which the God give for all of us.We should learn how to trust and be trust or keep trust,we always looking forward to be trust by the people around us. We can get many great memory on maintaining trust.First of all,if you want to be trusted, you should have a good personality.Secondly,do not your friends easily.As an old saying goes,seeing is believing.Last but not least,we always mention us to keep trust,not matter who the man is.Trust also can be regard the way of respect. Therefore,trust is a good personality we should get when we're in childhood.