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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第3套):网络沟通

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:41浏览次数:12940
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.


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文中从句过少;作者词汇基础扎实,注意文中极个别的拼写错误;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词。

用户练习作文:

The important of computer As is vividly dipicted in the carton above, it's important to use computer. More and more people like talk in the Internet. For example, wechat and QQ. The picture ask me about our parents no see themself child a long time. Why is that? Firstly, his child is business and work far away. The parents miss her very much. Secondly, many people don't like trouble. She think that her job is very busy and had no time contract with her parents. Lastly, a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate . To sum up, I think that electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact.

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