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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第3套):网络沟通

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:41浏览次数:12914
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.


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从句使用量不足,应增加从句和复合句的使用;作者词汇表达恰当,同时能较灵活地使用高级词汇;采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅。

用户练习作文:

The above picture describes a daily scenario that communication between teenagers and their parents through the Internet.There is no denying the fact that electronic communication has changed our life greatly,but I don't thing it will replace face-to-face contact. Firstly,face-to-face communication is much better than electronic communication for keeping the relationship between parents and the teenagers.Secondly,face-to-face communication can make people pay more attention to what they are talking about.Finally,the more important thing is keep close with parent is our duty,which can't be replay forever. To sum up,internet has greatly influenced the communication way,but it never replay face-to face communication.

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