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In China have a beautiful place that my hometown name is WUHan will makes you happe.It's center in China,the transportation is conventient.And it has some intenerst things.such as you can eating famous Hot Dry noodles , everybody have breakfast for it in WuHan.But it is hot of climate and you can used to that.