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2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:48浏览次数:45518
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2012年12月英语四级作文材料来源于美国劳工部网站的一份统计表,本次作文材料截取了其中一部分数据,并对时间做了修改,以下为材料原型,供大家参考。
Education pays...
Education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates
Note: Data are for persons age 25 and over. Earnings are for full-time wage and salary workers.

Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.

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文中能较熟练地使用一定的学术词汇,但词汇表达多样性不高,拼写检查还需加强;采用了一些简单的从句;文章结构欠严谨,基本没有衔接成分;连词使用偏少。

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According to this picture,we learned about the relationship between the education background and salary. It's said that average unemplyment rate is 7.6%,the average weekly earning is 797 dollars.The people who have doctor degree education have only 2.5% unempoyment rate and they can earn sufficient money.The people have professional degree education earn the most weekly wages. On the contrast,the people who have less than high school diploma only could earn 451 dollars a week.What's more,they will face more risk of unemploy. Nowdays,education have piayed a important part roll in one's life.More and more pople have to study hard to find a better job.On the other hand,education is a good teacher, she cause expand your horizontal,how to commucaite with people and distinguish what is ture or false. It makes you life easy and comfortable. In a word, we should learn acknowledge and study experience .I think we can accept the competive social.

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