题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
字数:150满分:100分
作者词汇表达较为熟练,学术词汇使用不是很多;可适当增加从句和长句的使用;文中衔接词丰富。
Trust is one of the good present which the God give for all of us.We should learn how to trust in, we are always look forward to being trust by the people around us. We can get many memories on maintaining the trust.First of all,if you want to be trusted, you should have a good personality.Secondly,do not your friends easily.As an old saying goes,seeing is believing.Last but not least,we always mention us to keep trust,not matter who the man is.Trust also can be regard the way of respect. Therefore,trust is a good personality we should get when we're in childhood.