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In China have a beautiful place that my hometown name is WUHan will makes you happy.It's center in China,the transportation is convenience.And it has some funny things.such as you can eat famous Hot Dry noodles , everybodys have breakfast for it in WuHan.But it is hot of climate and you can used to that.