2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

可适当增加长句和复杂句的使用；文章词汇表达不够丰富，在拼写方面也要继续努力；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。

Nothing succeeds without a strong will. No matter we do any thing,we need have a strong will. A strong will can help us have confidents and help us approach to succeed. If you have strong will,you can have abillity to complete great duty. If we have strong will,we can not give up,meanwhile,we also can became have pour to beat difficult.so,a strong will is important to succeed. we are as a college students,we should understand the immportant of a str ong will.we study day by day,if we don't have a strong will,I guess,lots of students will choose give up. so,we should from a good habbit.