文章词汇表达要更加熟练,希望能更多使用一些高级词汇;错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练;不能熟练使用过渡词,文章结构欠佳。
In China have a beautiful place that my hometown name is WUHan will makes you happy.It's center in China,the transportation is convenience.And it has some funny things.such as you can eat famous Hot Dry noodles , everybody have breakfast for it in WuHan.But it is hot of climate and you can used to that.It has quite a few rivers in the city, so let it is beautiful because that it.