2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

词汇表达不够丰富，要增加高级词汇的使用；错误句子很少，但从句使用不熟练；不能熟练使用过渡词，基本没有衔接词。

In China have a beautiful place that my hometown name is WUHan will makes you happy.It's center in China,the transportation is convenience.And it has some funny things.such as you can eat famous Hot Dry noodles , everybody have breakfast for it in WuHan.But it is hot of climate and you can used to that.It has quite a few rivers in the city, so let it is beautiful as to that it.