作者词汇表达丰富度要继续提升,高级词汇使用过少;错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练;过渡词和衔接词使用欠丰富,层次欠清晰。
In China have a beautiful place that my hometown name is WUHan will makes you happy.It's center in China,the transportation is convenience.And it has some funny things.such as you can eat famous Hot Dry noodles , everybody have breakfast for it in WuHan.But it is hot of climate and you can used to that.It has quite a few rivers in the city, so let it is beautiful because that it.I can show you around the rivers.