2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

作者使用词汇表达不够灵活，需要多使用一些高级词汇；错误句子很少，但从句使用不熟练；过渡词和衔接词使用欠丰富，层次欠清晰。

In China have a beautiful place that my hometown name is WUHan will makes you happy.It's center in China,the transportation is convenience.And it has some funny things.such as you can eat famous Hot Dry noodles , everybody have breakfast for it in WuHan.But it is hot of climate and you can used to that.It has quite a few rivers in the city, so let it is beautiful because that it.We can corss the reiver make some happy.