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I am a high school student. My school is a beautiful place. Four main buildings surround the lawn, On that lawn standing few artistic stone statues. One lane cross the lawn,At the middle of the lane there is a stone brigde named zhuangyuan brigde,Every year the senior students walk through the brigde to wish luck before they go into the final test. The east and west buildings are teaching classrooms and the north building is chemical labory and the south building is phisical labory. Behind the chemical building is our playground includes a football playground and some phisical training tools. Near the playground there is a inner playground, we play there basketball and baminton. At the southeastern corner of the school we have a swimming pool, At summer season we swim twice a week. The domitory and the canteen are at the east side. I like my shcool and I have good time here.