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小学三年级英语作文:My school

发布时间:2013-05-15 11:55浏览次数:6020
要求:
用英语描述下自己的学校,字数在100字以内。
用户的作文(系统评分57.5分
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句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用;作者能词汇表达较准确熟练,但请仔细检查词汇的拼写;请注意分段;可以适当增加副词的使用。

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I am a high school student. My school is a beautiful place. Four main buildings surround the lawn, On that lawn standing few artistic stone statues. One lane cross the lawn,At the middle of the lane there is a stone brigde named zhuangyuan brigde,Every year the senior students walk through the brigde to wish luck before they go into the final test. The east and west buildings are teaching classrooms and the north building is chemical labory and the south building is phisical labory. Behind the chemical building is our playground includes a football playground and some phisical training tools. Near the playground there is a inner playground, we play there basketball and baminton. At the southeastern corner of the school we have a swimming pool, At summer season we swim twice a week. The domitory and the canteen are at the east side. I like my shcool and I have good time here.

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