2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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In China have a beautiful place that my hometown name is WUHan will makes you happy.It's center in China,the transportation is convenience.And it has some funny things.such as you can eat famous Hot Dry noodles , everybody have breakfast for it in WuHan.But it is hot of climate and you can used to that.It has quite a few rivers in the city, so let it is beautiful because that it.I will show you around to visit the interesting places provided that you come here.Do you already love the city?Come here.